GenerationBenz on form again. This time with a great example of how not to send a community reminder.
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Generation Benz Moderator
First, it’s too formal. Don’t call an automatic notification an automatic notification. It guarantees the rest of your message wont be read.
Second, give a reason to return to the community. What is the discussion I should be participating in? What are the upcoming events? What is the benefit to me to return?
Finally, don’t sign off as “Generation Benz Moderator”. I want to know who is e-mailing me. I want to know who is responsible. Who can I contact with questions? Where is the e-mail address and phone number below?